tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2684536971172270103.post714643873401274082..comments2023-10-09T12:06:17.459+01:00Comments on Emerging Writer: Black RabbitEmerging Writerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06539530495238043923noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2684536971172270103.post-7715629578794473042009-09-29T21:14:15.481+01:002009-09-29T21:14:15.481+01:00Particularly like the "minor aberration catch...Particularly like the "minor aberration catching the eye". Very realistic. (I was amazed to discover that peripheral vision is more sensitive than whatever we see "in the middle" of our vision).Dominic Rivronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02618013365521035400noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2684536971172270103.post-36536823848180567632009-09-29T11:21:02.798+01:002009-09-29T11:21:02.798+01:00Very nice, your own self!Very nice, your own self!Padhraig Nolanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11010869074911253314noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2684536971172270103.post-84452644648303993482009-09-29T08:10:02.337+01:002009-09-29T08:10:02.337+01:00Love it. I have one little red-headed daughter and...Love it. I have one little red-headed daughter and she's always talking about this (how it's hard to merge into a crowd...).<br />xRachel Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11803852725693518924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2684536971172270103.post-16373274156171031032009-09-29T07:57:55.695+01:002009-09-29T07:57:55.695+01:00This is very nice EW, and I really like that idea ...This is very nice EW, and I really like that idea of wanting to be unique/ completely yourself even with all the risks that this entails. Lovely.Niamh Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519443787482685320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2684536971172270103.post-82257149253065117002009-09-28T23:28:57.724+01:002009-09-28T23:28:57.724+01:00Fascinating look at the onset of evening and the s...Fascinating look at the onset of evening and the shadowy qualities of the nocturnal ones.Dr. Jeanne Irishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11277286531162894465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2684536971172270103.post-42507955211818814952009-09-28T22:54:07.830+01:002009-09-28T22:54:07.830+01:00The tone was perhaps set by the terrible(in the fr...The tone was perhaps set by the terrible(in the frightening sense) rabbit/hare sculpture, but there was something eerie and of the suoernatural about this ,EW.(very ted hughes)It's a scary thing yet so vulnerable.A powerful twist of an ending too, echoing the vulnerabilty.A really fine poem, I like it.Totalfeckineejithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05352708391465031655noreply@blogger.com