Sunday, 16 January 2011

Breathing on the Poetry Bus

I huff on board. TFE at the wheel this week. Original prompt here.
Other passengers here.

Removed now for rework
at

9 comments:

  1. Totalfeckineejit16 January 2011 at 23:12

    Seriously scary.You've nailed my dread.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Titus17 January 2011 at 01:18

    Too close to the bone for me too.
    Fine work.

    ReplyDelete
  3. Niamh B17 January 2011 at 09:25

    Pretty icky!! Not something we like to think of too often, but yes, a fine poem

    ReplyDelete
  4. Helen17 January 2011 at 13:44

    Cautionary tale for all of us ... loved this.

    ReplyDelete
  5. Louise17 January 2011 at 17:56

    Reality check, well said, we all take life for granted sometimes. Good wake up call!!

    ReplyDelete
  6. Karen17 January 2011 at 19:59

    Brought us back to the real world with this one.

    ReplyDelete
  7. Totalfeckineejit17 January 2011 at 21:23

    You is linked as Katy. I'll add Emerging Writer to it.

    ReplyDelete
  8. Emerging Writer18 January 2011 at 13:38

    Thanks everyone. It was a bit gloomy I guess.

    ReplyDelete
  9. Jinksy19 January 2011 at 17:07

    Stark reality to leave us breathless...

    ReplyDelete