Emerging Writer: Breathing on the Poetry Bus

Sunday, 16 January 2011

I huff on board. TFE at the wheel this week. Original prompt here.
Other passengers here.

Removed now for rework

Totalfeckineejit said...: Seriously scary.You've nailed my dread.; 16 January 2011 at 23:12
Titus said...: Too close to the bone for me too.
Fine work.; 17 January 2011 at 01:18
Niamh B said...: Pretty icky!! Not something we like to think of too often, but yes, a fine poem; 17 January 2011 at 09:25
Helen said...: Cautionary tale for all of us ... loved this.; 17 January 2011 at 13:44
Louise said...: Reality check, well said, we all take life for granted sometimes. Good wake up call!!; 17 January 2011 at 17:56
Karen said...: Brought us back to the real world with this one.; 17 January 2011 at 19:59
Totalfeckineejit said...: You is linked as Katy. I'll add Emerging Writer to it.; 17 January 2011 at 21:23
Emerging Writer said...: Thanks everyone. It was a bit gloomy I guess.; 18 January 2011 at 13:38
Jinksy said...: Stark reality to leave us breathless...; 19 January 2011 at 17:07