Sunday, 16 January 2011

Breathing on the Poetry Bus

I huff on board. TFE at the wheel this week. Original prompt here.
Other passengers here.

Removed now for rework

10 comments:

Totalfeckineejit said...

Seriously scary.You've nailed my dread.

Titus said...

Too close to the bone for me too.
Fine work.

Niamh B said...

Pretty icky!! Not something we like to think of too often, but yes, a fine poem

Helen said...

Cautionary tale for all of us ... loved this.

120 Socks said...

Reality check, well said, we all take life for granted sometimes. Good wake up call!!

Karen said...

Brought us back to the real world with this one.

Totalfeckineejit said...

You is linked as Katy. I'll add Emerging Writer to it.

Kat Mortensen said...

I could have put that picture up for mine. They should put this on cigarette packs.

Excellent!

Emerging Writer said...

Thanks everyone. It was a bit gloomy I guess.

Jinksy said...

Stark reality to leave us breathless...